The source from which the following was retrieved from is BBC News.
A thirty three year old man by the name of Simon Glerum was given a twelve month prison sentence and suspended for two years, as well as put on a five year sexual harm prevention order and a sex offender treatment programme as well as the doll being destroyed, for the following act that he would of gotten away with lest it had not been intercepted.
Mr Simon Glerum had purchased a anatomically realistic child like sex doll which came with accessories such as; hair, a hair brush and fingernails from Hong Kong which it was fortunately intercepted at the Stanford airport in January. Not only that but he also admitted to the sickening act of not only importing the indecent or obscene doll but to also to the possession of indecent images of children.
The relevance of this is to show how serious this subject is and that it is a dark and disgusting reality that is enacted by persons. It also brings awareness to this issue and it also indicates the increased and possible offences that can and are being committed against children.
Thank you Rhian. This is an interesting first post, highlighting to some practices that may not be known to the wider world. Going forward do remember what elements make up good writing. CCCEO. How many of these elements do you think that you have used in this piece? How could you have implemented more?
ReplyDeleteI think i used around 2 or 3, and maybe by expanding more on it i could implemented more of the CCCEO.
DeleteYou referenced a source, and used context- so well done
ReplyDeleteI liked how you included a picture to describe what you are talking about, how you put where you got your information from and you explain the relevance of the news to reality.
ReplyDeleteThis a very strange topic what interested you about it?
ReplyDeleteThe fact that it was strange.
Deleteyou didn't really express too many personal feelings about the subject of the News, however you did stick close to you're source,
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